Capone's Tears

There is a lot of bad writing on this here site. Mostly penned by myself. A lot. But I done finished enough school to know that this here sentence is atrocious -- not in the grammatical sense, but the all important complete and utter shit sense.

Pat Forde, via ESPN.com:
"When it was over and the first net had been snipped, there arrived a scene sweet enough to choke up a mobster."